So after deciding that I really liked certain elements that sort of cemented my style I went back and repainted a few images. The first one I was really not satisfied with it and tried to analyze what made it so different and of course it is more washed out and not as vibrant or finished looking. The second I just did not like how nonsmooth the girl looked.
Before
Watercolor look but washed out
After
I concentrated on bringing in more vibrant colors and finishing it more with pencil.
Before
Girl was just not as finished looking and her hair was a bit choppy.
After
Cleaner and softer.